Spoiler Alert: There may be comments in this review that you would prefer not to see if you plan to read the books.
Ok, first no judgments please! I was coerced into reading Fifty Shades of Grey. Yes, forced! My neighbor offered me the book and I declined. Then I found it on my porch. This happened last summer. Then she asked me several times if I had read it yet. After six months I decided to peruse it so I could return it and let her know if I liked or disliked it.
My neighbor loved it. She loved the whole trilogy. She is older than I am. My thought was holy cow what’s in this book!
It’s an easy read especially if you are older. That is because you breeze through the sex parts. If you are young you may want to read them twice. It’s the same old plot. Girl meets guy who is perfect in every way except one and she struggles with whether she can change him. Guy meets girl who he thinks will fill his sexual fantasies period. Not all that unusual (except for the fantasies part).
The writing is terrible. The phrases are redundant and repetitious. I read a few reviews and some writers did word counts which are hilarious.
The heroine if you can call her that is either dumb or naïve or a combination of both. Ana is a 21-year-old virgin (yeah, really hard to believe) just graduating from college. Christian Grey is drop dead gorgeous (of course) and obscenely rich. It’s almost like reading a Danielle Steel book (with a little extra kink and worse writing) where everyone is perfect except for that one thing.
Ana’s vocabulary is limited although she is supposed to be very bright. Her favorite words which you find on every page include “crap,” “down there” (do I have to explain that one to you?), “inner goddess” (which is located down there) and “oh my.” She blushes at least once on every page even when there is no sex going on. She chews on her lower lip constantly which causes Christian to want to “boink” her on the spot (wonder what her dentist thinks of all those lip sores?). There are many (ad nauseam) “sharp intakes of breath.” I also was astounded at how accomplished she was at sex for being a virgin.
I only read the first book. There really wasn’t an end and I think that was purposeful. No closure will get you to read the second and so on.
Having had enough of the poor writing, I decide to Google the title with spoiler. That gave me reviews that are a synopsis of the other two books. They look like more of the same with some progress. They get married, have children, deal with bullies and past partners but there isn’t an ending or resolution. Does she ever change him? Does he really love her? Why are they the way they are? Can they keep their hands of each other’s junk?
It’s not the Kama Sutra but I must say that I did learn some things. Thank God for Mr. Google. I had no idea what a butt plug is but you can buy them on Amazon. I know what vanilla sex is and safe words.
Hidden under the banality of the novel were glimpses of a classic “abuse mentality” that I didn’t like. It seemed to me that Ana took responsibility every time Christian became angry or unhappy. That made me uncomfortable especially since he often threatened to spank or beat her in some way. Others have said that they felt differently since it was two consenting adults and the violence was just active foreplay. Ouch!
I am not a prude but this was not my cup of tea for more reasons than the sex. However, the writer is a genius. She found a way to sell three poorly written books with the probability of more in the making. Cha-ching, cha-ching! Why didn’t I think of that!
(Note: There is no judgement on anyone who enjoys this stuff either.)
Art credit: Image is the book cover courtesy of Wikipedia. That tie is used to tie up Ana for some of the sex scenes!
I wasn’t really interested in reading this book, but was tempted because of all the hype. Glad I didn’t cave in and read it.
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All who comment about the books never reference the plot; they just say that it’s an easy read and a poor write 😉
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A plot? There was a plot? Damn! I missed it!
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After reading “9 1/2 weeks” years ago, I vowed I wouldn’t waste my time reading any more of those types of books. Your analysis sounds about like what I suspected. Glad I saved my money.
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I didn’t read that book but there was a comparison to it in one of the reviews I read.
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And I wondered why it is such the rave ? Rather than read this bunk I’d go back to Institutes of Religion by John Calvin and the complete works of Martin Luther.
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Couldn’t stop laughing! You have nailed (no pun intended) it with your review. I refused to read this book from the get-go and you have validated why. Thanks, Kate.
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I read all 3. Mostly in fascination because I couldn’t believe how badly-written they are, but how successful they are. More copies published than the bible. I liked the emails between them. They were much better written than the books. I wonder if she had someone else write them. My only other observation is, a social anthropologist could have a field day with them. She took a subject that really is probably the last taboo and, because she made the guy a gorgeous billionaire and the girl a smart and beautiful virgin, she brought it into the mainstream and made it acceptable dinner party conversation. And God knows how much rope and how many sets of handcuffs she’s single handedly sold.’
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I had wanted to talk about the emails in my post but forgot. You are right. They are the only thing that is well written. They were the one thing I routinely read and enjoyed. I was more fascinated with the neck tie than ropes. How erotic is it to see someone wear a necktie that was used to tie you up?
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You mean to tell me Danielle Steele isn’t the worst writer to become rich and famous by writing glorified romance novels?
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Danielle Steel looks like a pulitzer prize winner next to this author.
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I read all three of them. NOT because I liked them. Because everyone on WordPress was trashing them and I wanted to be part of the jokes! The books were so bad. So bad. I fell asleep during the sex scenes at one point.
But yeah, I admire the author. Even if she came up with the most terribly written books with the worst characters and plot, she is a millionaire. Hats off to her.
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I guess that’s where I was with the additional encouragement from the neighbor although I won’t read all three. I do admire her ability to make this profitable.
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I haven’t been rushing out to buy this book and now I know why! Thank for sparing me the effort to find it and read it. What a community service you are providing!
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Haven’t wanted to read it and now I know for sure I don’t want to read it.
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The young woman I work with has read all three books and she absolutely *gushes* over them. “This is the first series I’ve read where I want the hero to step right out into my life!” was almost enough to get me to read the book, but the reviews and excerpts were enough to convince me it’s a piece of crap and I will continue to refuse offers to borrow the book from some other fan because I can’t stand bad writing, either. To each his own, and bravo for the author and her piles of money.
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Really? I don’t think I want Christian Grey near me, money and looks or not. He does have a kind side but he is intimidating when he is angry and of course so controlling.
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I can’t stand a badly written book.
But it’s gotten huge press and made lots of money – so clones will appear.
Sad for better writers that are ignored
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Brilliant review – just what I want to know before reading a book.
If it’s all cliches and victim – no thank you! You’ve done a public service with this review – not that I intended to read it, but you’ve certainly enlarged my general knowledge with your comments.
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Oh you poor thing. What can we do for you? Some kind of mind erasing. I read the sample on kindle and laughed and asked myself if this was serious. This can’t be real writing? Ghastly.
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I treated myself to a gingerbread muffin and a cup of tea when I finished. Probably should have had a good margarita!
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I’ve not been tempted to read this series. Thanks for your candid review.
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This book has so many bad reviews but people keep reading it. Congratulations for giving it your honest appraisal and convincing me to find something else for my book club! 🙂
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OMG! This would be a riot for a book club!
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No more than two hours ago I was having a conversation with a writer friend about this book, however, from a different angle. I read this book. Why? Because Ana was attending a school located only three miles from my house. (Hey… this takes place in my neighborhood. I thought I should check it out.) You learn quickly as a writer, if the story is set in a real location you better get the specifics right…. she didn’t, not by a long shot. In this case it didn’t seem to matter.
Hope your neighbor finds you a better read next time. 😉
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My neighbor is wonderful. She loans me all sorts of books that I like. I felt I owed it to her to at least give this one a try.
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I’ve had no inclination to read this book. It sounds insipid to me. Your review makes me feel that not reading it is the right way to go. How does such crap get published?
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I’d like to know that myself. Maybe someone out there who is involved with publishing could give an answer? It’s the poor writing and editing I couldn’t get past.
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My fiance and I bought the book, wondering what the fuss was all about, and suspecting that it had contributed to the incredible pregnancy explosion that we noticed in Denver this past spring and summer. I think we read about two pages, and the writing was so bad we just couldn’t read any more. And the punishment thing really rubs me the wrong way – no pun intended.
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Yeah, I wouldn’t make a good submissive either.
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